When conversion drops, most stores reach for more ads, a fresh design, or a new theme. None of those fix a clarity leak.
Before changing anything, we find where buyers are getting stuck.
We call them the Four Leaks: Clarity, Doubt, Friction, Value. Every audit maps your page against all four.
How many of these do you recognise from your own page?
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The Ritual Set™
A set. For rituals.
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Our signature set of the essentials, thoughtfully elevated. Which essentials? Yes. May improve skin, mood, or neither.
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Results may vary. Results may also not occur. For external use only, probably. Please allow 5–9 business days for delivery, or longer, depending. All sales are final. Extremely final.
Find where buyers lose clarity, trust, or momentum.
Step 2: Prioritise the fixes
Focus on the changes most likely to improve conversion.
Step 3: Improve the page
Refine the parts that influence action most.
Step 4: Implement in Shopify
Apply changes carefully and prepare the page for launch.
Step 5: QA and launch checks
Final review across key devices and flows.
Selected proof
Four stores. Same pattern.
From our store-build and CRO partnership work across jewellery, wellness, and food brands. The same diagnostic lens now drives every Product Page Audit. Switch between clients to see what changed.
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Pricing
Two ways in. No retainers.
Start with a free Review. Continue only if the numbers make sense.
Product Page Audit
$750
A full diagnostic of one product page against the Four Leaks. You get a prioritised fix list (specific changes ranked by expected impact) as a report you can share internally. Delivered within 5 business days.
✓ If it doesn't surface at least 5 specific, actionable fixes, you don't pay.
Implementation
from $1,500
We build the prioritised fixes directly in your Shopify theme, conservatively, with QA across key devices and flows before anything ships. Your $750 audit fee is credited in full. Continue, and the diagnosis costs you nothing.
Who's behind this
One person does the work. You're talking to him.
I'm Abdul Wahhab. I build and optimise Shopify stores, with CXL certifications in User Research and Buyer Psychology. Every Review, every audit, and every implementation is done by me: no account managers, no handoffs, no retainer. If I don't think I can move your numbers, I'll tell you on the call.
No. In many cases, the right move is focused product page optimisation, not rebuilding the whole store.
We diagnose the problem first. If traffic quality or message mismatch is the real issue, we will say so.
The work is handled conservatively, with implementation care suited to an active sales store.
No. The process is built around specific findings, clear priorities, and practical implementation.
Yes, when the opportunity exists. Product page clarity often supports stronger AOV through better offer understanding, bundles, and purchase confidence.
This service is best for stores already getting traffic and sales, but under-converting relative to that demand.
Fixed scope, no retainer, and one person accountable: you talk directly to whoever does the work. The audit is a defined deliverable with a guarantee attached, and the fee is credited in full if you continue to implementation. If we can't help, we say so in the free Review before you spend anything.
In the Review itself: you'll leave the 20-minute call with two or three specific observations about your page. The full audit lands within 5 business days of kickoff, and implementation typically completes inside 2 to 3 weeks.
You don't need it. This is diagnosis-first, not testing-dependent: heuristic analysis, buyer psychology, session evidence, and review mining. Clarity problems are visible without a test; testing is a luxury for later.
You can. Read the page as a first-time buyer would, list every question it leaves unanswered, and fix those first. The audit is for when you'd rather have the leaks found, prioritised, and fixed in weeks instead of figuring it out between everything else you run.
